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Thursday, November 1, 2007

Toward Nothing ~ Word Offering

Over pine needles
And pavement, these gypsy feet
Rush toward nothing

© B.Y. Penman 2007 - All rights reserved.

3 comments:

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Wow! 2 kudos, as we say on MySpace. :)

The Uneasy Supplicant said...

Excellent work!
~JD

Princess Haiku said...

Lovely contrasts in this haiku.

BTW I spent some time perusing your blog and wanted to thank you for the technical tips etc.